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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 12:58 am 
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p354 - background section. "irregardless" is incorrect. Regardless is the word you want.
p355 - the paragraph on Svalms is not complete.


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 8:51 am 
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raleel wrote:
p354 - background section. "irregardless" is incorrect. Regardless is the word you want.
p355 - the paragraph on Svalms is not complete.


Hahaha you found the inside joke before my intended victim (Ludologist)! "Irregardless" was room-wide groaner when it came up in the new WH40k card game ballroom presentation- an insta-game-turn-off LOL. I had to throw it in for laughs, I know I laughed when I typed it HA!

Thanks for the Svalms catch, bad cut and paste grrrrrrrrr.

ps. The vignette chapter still has to be vetted by the editors. Once I merge their edits I will upload the final doc for proofing by you fine Vikings! ;)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 9:14 am 
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HA! Yes! Picture a room of 300 or so people, most of whom are geeks of one kind or another. Most people groaned, but every table had at least one language-aficionado who HAD to explain loudly why the recorded man was wrong, and that they should change their video before embarrassing themselves.


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 10:05 am 
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I'm sure I have NO IDEA what kind of person you speak of! I've NEVER been this kind of person. Not once.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2014 1:36 pm 
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p29, third paragraph: is the correct spelling "Hibernian" or "Hybernian"? Both are featured :p
p35 5th paragraph: Bjorn Farmann wasn't even invited, but he managed to conquer an extra R, send someone to assassinate it!


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 12:52 am 
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P185 - the recipe ingredient list calls for dried blackberries, but the instructions say frozen berries.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 26, 2014 11:25 pm 
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11-26-2014 p86
One entry for Sindri is spelled Eitri

P94 necromancers vow - it says Minor Sac. Probably should spell that out to minor sacrifice. As I don't think you abbreviate it anywhere else (yet!)


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2014 4:49 am 
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p42, second paragraph: "When Ivar regained consciousness, his wife was dying", you forgot the "was"


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:02 am 
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p45, 4th paragraph: "The bride refused to leave [...] Similarly, Ilmarinien dit not want to live [...]". Wasn't it Vainamoinen who was supposed to marry Louhi's daughter?


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P297 - the bow/stern picture - you might want to clarify how ships are positioned on the grid. All of the other examples have the bow between hexes, with the keel line down a long line between the hexes. That one picture has the bow in the middle, and one would presume the mast is in a hex there as well.


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